the story and comprehension was good, but "the composer" wasn't really a good choice of music for this particular flash. but this is still a good flash, the animation wasn't all to great but the story was kind of touchy.
6/10 good job!
i really enjoyed this flash video, i hope to see more in the near future!
one the side note at the end when their drinking tea make sure their mouths open when drinking or it look unrealistic -2 pts for that but over all it was a funny flash! keep up the good work. :)
i dont get the whole point of this flash, so until further notice i will think of this as rubbish, until i understand what i'm to be seeing, with that being said lets get on with the review shall we? first work on the animation and movement, and finally two make sure the flash makes sence and not just a bush of jib-er-ish.
i don't understand the point of it all? maybe if you put some stuff explaining it i might have givin a better review but frakley i don't understand whats happening... sorry 0/10
It was obvious what happened, penis man saw his arch nemisis Vagina face and blasted come at her face because he knew that was her weakness. Vagina face became pregnant and then popped.
to me this is very ironic, the fact is that he hit the disk drive masking it do the "3-ring of death" thats what i call irony. great job, but this wasn't that great due to graphics wise. just work on that and the animation and you'd get a 7-8 outta me
it kept me goin till the end, now to the fact that it was only your second attept i think it was fairly nice, but yes it was kind of choppy here and there but overall good job, and if you want the animation smoother, make the lines a little better, but ya it was a good idea hope to see more.
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Rated 5 / 5 stars September 29, 2008
Awesome
Lol great series and i love the metallica "one" beginning, i found it quite unique, took me a few trys to figure that one out. but yeah over all 10/10
Rated 5 / 5 stars October 12, 2007
great!
good job! im gonna add you to fav artist i wanna see more! hope to see more of this series! :)
Thanks! Rest assured that more is on the way.
Rated 3 / 5 stars October 1, 2007
it's ok
the story and comprehension was good, but "the composer" wasn't really a good choice of music for this particular flash. but this is still a good flash, the animation wasn't all to great but the story was kind of touchy.
6/10 good job!
Rated 4 / 5 stars October 1, 2007
cool
i really enjoyed this flash video, i hope to see more in the near future!
one the side note at the end when their drinking tea make sure their mouths open when drinking or it look unrealistic -2 pts for that but over all it was a funny flash! keep up the good work. :)
Rated 1.5 / 5 stars September 30, 2007
eh it's ok
it's an ok flash pretty decent but basic, hmmm just work on the movement, and yeah, you'll have a better flash in no time
definatly. i have never really done full body before. (look at my other submissions)
this was definatly a practice run for full body animatiing
Rated 0 / 5 stars September 30, 2007
im sorry
i dont get the whole point of this flash, so until further notice i will think of this as rubbish, until i understand what i'm to be seeing, with that being said lets get on with the review shall we? first work on the animation and movement, and finally two make sure the flash makes sence and not just a bush of jib-er-ish.
im sorry but 0/10
Rated 0 / 5 stars September 30, 2007
ummm no offence but...
i don't understand the point of it all? maybe if you put some stuff explaining it i might have givin a better review but frakley i don't understand whats happening... sorry 0/10
It was obvious what happened, penis man saw his arch nemisis Vagina face and blasted come at her face because he knew that was her weakness. Vagina face became pregnant and then popped.
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars September 30, 2007
lol nice...
lol just as the creator of family guy himself saw it in his sketch, good job, just work on the animation a lil more but 10 for comedy.
Rated 2.5 / 5 stars September 30, 2007
truly a laugh-out-louad
to me this is very ironic, the fact is that he hit the disk drive masking it do the "3-ring of death" thats what i call irony. great job, but this wasn't that great due to graphics wise. just work on that and the animation and you'd get a 7-8 outta me
Rated 3 / 5 stars September 30, 2007
eh it's a good concept
it kept me goin till the end, now to the fact that it was only your second attept i think it was fairly nice, but yes it was kind of choppy here and there but overall good job, and if you want the animation smoother, make the lines a little better, but ya it was a good idea hope to see more.
i've got a good one coming =) (i hope)